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Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?

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The nuclear
technology
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 uses a lot worldwide for different purposes. Often people connect it with atomic bombs or disasters on nuclear power plants,
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 there are a lot of peaceful applications. And
this
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 is why I believe in nuclear
technology
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.
Firstly
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, certainly the main application is producing energy. Nuclear plants are considered as the sustainable source of energy. Definitely, it is not
such
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 green as renewable sources, and there is a problem of waste management, but it is much better than traditional coal and gas power stations.
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, people know two nuclear accidents which have devastating effects on the whole world, a lot of people and animals died, large parts of land are not suitable for life anymore. We should learn
on
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of
about
 these mistakes, do more researches, and educate people, who work on the plants, better.
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, the nuclear
technology
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applies
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is applied
 in medicine, for cancer treatment, x-ray medical devices or producing drugs. Obviously, it helps save human lives.
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,
this
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technology
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 helps developing or poor countries
to achieve
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achieve
 food security, because people apply it in agriculture to protect plants from insects to save the harvest, in food testing to escape unhealthy food, or in
selection
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selecting
 programs for faster growing of plants. To sum up, I believe in nuclear
technology
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, because it is science and it can be used as for constructive or destructive purposes, it depends on people who choose how to apply
this
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 knowledge. But we should be very careful in using
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 powerful
technology
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 to avoid any catastrophes in the future.

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