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Some parents believe that learning Mathematics at school is redundant and not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life.

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Learning mathematics at school has become a topic of debate among parents. While some parents believe that teaching mathematics at the school is unnecessary, other parents believe that it is essential.
This
 essay will discuss the perspective of both sides in depth. On one hand, spending plenty of time studying Mathematics, which most people do not use beyond
basic level
Suggestion
the basic level
 as an adult, is worthless.
For instance
, most pupils use complex calculus equations and trigonometric formulae only to solve mathematical problems included in
syllabus
Suggestion
the syllabus
.
Moreover
, they retain
this
 information only up till exams. A recent study by 'New Student' magazine has shown that students spend half of their study time practicing numerical equations in comparison to other subjects but rarely use
this
 knowledge when they join the workforce.
On the other hand
, studying mathematics has its own benefits. It has potential of developing students cognitive skills. While solving complicated mathematics exercises, pupils have to think of numerous possible ways to get the answer;
as a result
, it will increase their logical reasoning skills. Aside from
this
, in recent days, the entrance test for admissions to high schools or colleges include tough Math questions to verify student aptitude.
Hence
, despite the fact that many believe that students should give more importance to other subjects, it is absolutely worth studying Mathematics to raise
students level
Suggestion
the students' level
students' level
student's level
 of intelligent quotient, which will help them distinguish themselves from
thousands
Suggestion
the thousands
 of other pupils. To recapitulate,
this
 essay discussed that studying Mathematics is a waste of time;
however
 it
also
 helps to develop students' mental abilities. In my opinion, schools should continue to encourage their students to learn mathematics.
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