Some people think that dangerous sports such as boxing, or motor-racing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that some

sports

are likely considered to be risky and unsafe for some people. In my opinion, some of these

sports

should not be allowed for a couple of reasons. First of all, boxing is a kind of a sport that might

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fatal injuries for athletes in the long run.

This

is because an athlete might be hit in the head repetitively, which will damage the brain.

For instance

, the iconic boxer Mike Tyson, which

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one of the strongest players in boxing is, unfortunately, suffering from

Parkinson

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disease

due to

this

kind of

sports

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.

Moreover

, doctors announced that the main reason behind

this

disease is being hit many times

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very sensitive areas.

In contrast

, if he did not play

this

kind of

sports

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, he would not have

this

disease.

Furthermore

, another type of

sports

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that should be banned is

motor-racing

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. The reason behind it is that racers sometimes lose the ability to control their bikes

due to

high speed, as these bikes can simply exceed 300

kilo-meters

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per hour.

Therefore

, deadly accidents might occur and

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in death. To illustrate, Michael Schumacher was recently suffering from a coma for 5 years

due to

a deadly accident in the World Race Championship. Officials said that he lost control

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one of the curves

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resulted in serious injuries.

On the contrary

, if he was not driving at a high speed on that curve, he would not be able to be in

this

coma for many years.

To conclude

, many

sports

should be prohibited to save lives.

Although

such

sports

bring

excitements

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through the crowds, athletes can suffer from serious injuries.