There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it

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Dear

Careem

Team Officer,

This

is Syeda Fatima, one of the regular

user

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careem

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career

taxi. I am writing

this

to inform you about my recent experiences with your taxi service.

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I am an old user of

careem

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career

, still I am getting

dissappointed

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disappointed

about the services. Few things I would like to mention to drive your attention

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the difficulties that

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and other customers are facing. These days, I am going through many cancellations from the drivers. As I use

taxi

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for my work, so I need to be prompt. Due to the cancellation after waiting long for the captain, it makes me waste my time and reach late to work.

Also

, my other colleagues are facing

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problem

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careem

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career

Kareem

. I would like to give my

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feedback

, by sharing with you few suggestions. To make customers not

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waste their time, captains can see the details of the picking and dropping locations

initially

to avoid cancelling later if

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not willing to go to the specific locations.

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, kindly

donot

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do not

don't

charge the customers in order to cancel the rides after desperately waiting for 'Not Moving' drivers. I would appreciate your efforts for the improvement on

this

aspect. Kind regards, Fatima

Thu Jan 30 2020

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