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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The Graph provides
the
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information about
waste
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 produced in
tonnes
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 by three companies namely
Company
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 A,
companu
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company
 B,
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and
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company
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 C between the
period
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 2000 and 2015.
overall
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 from the
graph
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graph,
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it is clear that
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 the sewage produced by
Company
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 A and
Company
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 B has been
decresed
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decreased
decreed
 by
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the
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end of the
period
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in
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 contrast,
amount
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the amount
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 of
waste
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 from
company
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 c increased steadily. in the
year
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 2000,
Company
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 A marked to produce
highest
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the highest
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 amount of
waste
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 but with every subsequent
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year
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year,
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 it has shown a remarkable decrease in the quantity of
waste
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 it produced from 12
tonnes
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 a
year
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 to 8
tonnes
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 a
year
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.In
contarory
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contrary
,
Company
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 C produced
lowest
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the lowest
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 sewage of 3
tonnes
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 at the start of the
period
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 and constantly increased to 10
tonnes
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 a
year
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at the end
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 of the
period
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.
Company
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 B
has
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produced approximately 8
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 a
year
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 at the beginning of the
year
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 and constantly increased to 10
tonnes
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 in the
year
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 2005 and
there after
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thereafter
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shown
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showed
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 a gradual decrease in
amount
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the amount
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 of
waste
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 produced and settled at
3
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the 3
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tonnes
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 mark by the end of the
period
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.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tonnes, company, period, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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