Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Describe the problem Say how long at has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

As it is said that to be perfect in life, not only
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have to be mentally fit but physically
also
.For being physically fit we need to do work out daily.In over county
India
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there is no trend of having physical activity in life, but it is lot adopted in western culture.Being fit, which is the best thing in hygiene. Overall,
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to sustain your living in
perfect
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manner you have to do exercise regularly. In earlier times of Indian folks use to do hard work, as they work for a whole day for cultivating the crop in the fields.
Furthermore
, we have seen that
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today's
today
todays
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generation
youth
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are very much involved in the workout in the form of gym,
yoga
and meditation.
Firstly
, As daily routine can be adopted by having planned and a good
acitivty
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activity
for the whole day that's why
yoga
is the best activity for
this
.
Yoga
can be done by any age people
however
, it does not require any strength.
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thing about
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yoga
is that we can fight
with
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diseases without having
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piles.
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, it is a long term process,
but
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it is very much effective.In Indian culture
Yoga
considered
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as
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the
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religious activity and
also
meintioned
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mentioned
in the holy books
also
.
Moreover
, we can compare the life span of the daily
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yoga
person and not
yoga
person, there is a lot
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.
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The Greeting

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  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

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  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
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