THE OVERUSE OF NATURAL RESOURSES CAUSE AN ULTIMATE EXHAUST OF THEM.PEOPLE HAVE BEEN USING THEM TO BE IN AWIM OF NEW STYLE SUCH AS MAKING NEW FURNITURE OF RECENT DESIGN. THIS CAUSE HUGE HARM TO THE ENVIRONMENT. THEREFORE, THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD DISCOURAGE PEOPLE THE OVERUSE OF THESE RESOURCES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU SUPPORT OR OPOSE THE IDEA

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Nature has abundant of gifts to offer and how they are going to be used is depend upon mankind.The human being is using these resources like wood
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water
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fossil fuel and many invaluable products from the start, without even giving a
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try to prevent; show opposition to
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overuse, governing bodies have to take measures. I fully support
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if all, due to globalization, there has been a massive competition among people in every aspect of life. Generally, it is
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it is wrong. Some affluent society members buy new furniture or renovate their whole place to add a new theme or buy a new car and discard the old materials. The wood used to make many furniture come from rare trees. More shocking part is that the elite and highly educated members of the society, wasting in
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a nature loving individual or a private organization an only fight in the democratic countries to certain extend but the main regulating laws must be assigned by the governing powers. People can easily be taught by their ruling parties. Awareness and development of scientific methods
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