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The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The information provided in the line chart illustrate
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an average number
the average number
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 of
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dioxide
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 emissions per
person
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 in five different countries from 1967 to 2007. Overall, while the UK had the highest average
carbon
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dioxide
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 emission per
person
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 over the period shown, average
carbon
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dioxide
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 per
person
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 in Portugal and Sweden had the lowest metric tons
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mt
a radioactive transuranic element
Mt
) even though they started to increase year by year. According to the data, average
carbon
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dioxide
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 per
person
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 for Portugal stood at about 3
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mt
a radioactive transuranic element
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 increased gradually and reached to 5
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In
 2007. Another noticeable increase can be seen
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in
 Italy. Average
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dioxide
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 emission per
person
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 increased from 5
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mt
a radioactive transuranic element
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mg
 to 7
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a radioactive transuranic element
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 in 1967 and 2007, respectively. Looking at the countries who experienced
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decrease
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decreases
in their
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in, their
 average
carbon
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dioxide
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 emissions per
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 in more detail, it can be seen that Sweden stood at 7
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 in 1967.
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 kept increasing to 11
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mg
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Until
 1977.
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, it started
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to fall
falling
 slightly to 7
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And
 6
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In
 1987 and 1997, respectively.
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, Sweden had its lowest
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 in 2007 at 5
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a radioactive transuranic element
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. Another country which experience
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decrease
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decreases
decreased
 in
carbon
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 emission per
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 was the United Kingdom. It stood at 11
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a radioactive transuranic element
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which
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 was the highest average
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 compared to other countries in 1967.
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 had a noticeable
decrease
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 to 7
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a radioactive transuranic element
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in
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In
 2007. Even though, the UK experience its lowest
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 in average
carbon
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dioxide
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 emissions per
person
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, its
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 was still the highest compared to other countries in 2007.

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