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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of new country. Other prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these chocies which one do you prefer?

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In
salad days
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the salad days
 of
millennium
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the millennium
, because of globalization people
migrant
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migrating
 to another
country
 for various options. After migration some people
follow
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Follow
new
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the new country's traditions
country
's traditions while others follow
thier
of them or themselves
their
 own. Before commenting any view I will discuss
topic
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the topic
a topic
 in following paragraph.
To begin
 with bright side, after migration
people learn
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people, learn
 new cultures and traditions. So they can enjoy the customs of
new
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the new country
a new country
country
.
secondly
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Secondly
, they
have
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Have
 to learn new cultures for getting
job
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a job
 Or making network. On the other side some people follow their own customs. They are following their own traditions and rituals.
As a
result they
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result, they
 find difficulties in making friends and find a job. Their survival is difficult in
new
Suggestion
a new country
the new country
new countries
country
. To
recapitualate
summarize briefly
recapitulate
, adopting new culture and technology are good.

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