You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job . You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter * Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college * Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her * suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Joyce,
How are you doing? I hope my letter meets you in good condition. I am writing in response to your letter regarding your decision to go to college or get
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I strongly suggest and urge you to consider getting a source of income. Going to a higher institution is not the best for you now because, considering the kind of things you love to Remove the article
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, you will not enjoy being in an academic setting at all. You will spend most of your time doing assignments, attending and spending hours in lecture rooms with a little or no chance for fun.
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I recommend you consider submitting applications at different media houses since you have always loved being on TV or facilitating a radio program. A good job as a presenter will be just fine for you.
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Please accept my warmest regard as you decide.
Yours Sincerely,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.