Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world.Some people think that this cannot be changed,while other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.Discuss both views and give your view.

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Ecosystem

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The ecosystem

has been affected

advirsely

in an adverse manner

adversely

from

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man

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manly

activities

such

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deforstation

the state of being clear of trees

deforestation

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overpopulation and burning fossil fuels. Man

need

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needs

to be

deligent

quietly and steadily persevering especially in detail or exactness

diligent

for consuming the products and avoid the consumption of products which are not

environment

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environmentally

friendly.In order to protect

enviroment

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the environment

environment

more trees need to be planted.

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It is not completely dependent on individual as government should

also

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contribute.A major

quesion

an instance of questioning

question

to be considered is whether the human being can save the environment There is high demand of houses in urban areas which leads to deforestation.

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Trees absorb CO2 and give off oxygen. By destroying forests more CO2 remains in the atmosphere affecting the climate.If every human takes

outh

away from home

out

oath

to plant and take care of one tree

for

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life

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it will mitigate the

reprecusions

a remote or indirect consequence of some action

repercussions

of cutting trees.

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Before consuming anything

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one should make sure that it will not

effect

have an effect upon

affect

the environment.

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instance solar

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instance, solar

energy should be used

instead

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of non renewable

enegy

(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs

energy

sources.Companies

are preferring

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are preferred

prefer

to in work from home culture so that carbon footprint can be reduced.

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,less

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, taking into account the consumtion and

also

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growing more trees,I would argue that for now, at least, Humans undoubtedly yield the significant role in controlling the enviromental problems

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

negative impact
extinct
deforestation
pollution
habitat destruction
mitigate
reverse
stricter regulations
protected areas
endangered species
education and awareness campaigns
biodiversity
consequences
renewable energy sources
organic farming
eco-tourism
environmental regulations
sustainable practices
natural ecosystems
preserve biodiversity

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world.Some people think that this cannot be changed,while other believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.Discuss both views and give your view.

Fully explain your ideas

Average daily sales of four products, by numbers of servings in winter and summer

The computer is widely used in education and some people think that teachers will not play important roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?

More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.