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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#cultures #technology
Technology is developing so fast in recent years.
Although
, many believe that with the growth of technology traditional
culture
 will lose their identity.
However
, ot
her m
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
another
another another
ight think that automation and fashion are totally mi
smatch.
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mismatched
I believe that modern high tech can affect the classic trend of
culture
. Most of the cities are trying to adopt the modern changes which are happening in urban areas and it is related to fa
shion industry.
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the fashion industry
Nowadays, everything is becoming more compact in size with the help of newly innovated machines and computers. For an example, people us
e t
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used
o wear sarees in the past ye
ars but n
Accept comma addition
years, but
ow everyone is trying to fit in
to f
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
oreign
culture
 which includes jeans and t-
shirts.
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirts
shirts
Most people prefer that because it is comfortable and easy to wear. In result of
this
, people feel more convenient wearing la
test clothes r
Suggestion
the latest clothes
ather than traditional outfits.
Moreover
, there were old trend of printing design on the materials by using natural paint and drying with the help of sunlight. But now advance tools are available in the market and all the work is done by the use of computers and their visual effects. For an instance, in India one of the most famous saree material called "Badhani" is made by gr
oup o
Suggestion
a group
groups
f people manually and colour
also
 done by the th
em,
a cooperative unit (especially in sports)
team
be
acuse o
for the reason that; on account of
because
f
this
 reason material used to
last
 for years and colour never use to get fa
de.
provide as food
fed
wh
ereas,
Suggestion
Whereas
today nobody buys that because everyone is using hi
ghtech p
Suggestion
high tech
rinters which affects the quality of products. That's how it is affecting the old tradition of the country. As I have mentioned earlier, there is a relation between revolutionary machines and cultural diversity. I am
totally agree t
Suggestion
totally agree
hat growing technology can affect the traditional
culture
 of any country. But with the time everything needs to get updated except certain things which shows or
iginal identity o
Suggestion
the original identity
f the place from where you belongs.
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