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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The evolution of human society has led to rapid lifestyles as we are facing nowadays.
This
 resulted in changes in our table manners as well as the way we eat, and I agree that these changes are posing a threat to our health. Their drawbacks will be
presenting
Suggestion
presented
 in
this
 paper.
First
 of all, the popularity of fast-
food
 chains is one of the main reasons for the increasing percentage of obesity from a very young age. Due to its convenience as well as addictive
flavors
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavours
, many people nowadays prefer to buy junk
food
 for their children
instead
 of traditional cooking.
However
, these types of
food
 are extremely high in fat and calories while lacking of dietary
fiber
a slender and greatly elongated substance capable of being spun into yarn
fibre
 which eventually results in obesity. Those who eat junk
food
 day after day will
also
 face the threat of having a stroke, which may claim their life.
Moreover
, the habit of using phones while eating is
also
 a problem to discuss. For those who appreciate traditional family meals, using phones while eating is extremely unpleasant.
Besides
, as we don't pay attention to the process of eating,
food
 may stick in our throats and prevent us from breathing properly, which can be very dangerous.
Also
, family meal is the time of the day when family members share their stories as well as the problems they are facing, and from that family
relationships
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relationship
 will be tightened.
Therefore
, if all family members just focus on their phones, their relationships may get worse in the end. All in all, our eating lifestyles are different from previous generations. Parents should pay attention to their children's phone usage as well as eating habits to prevent them from doing harm to their health.
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