The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now.

The two maps indicate several significant

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of

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the village

park

over a period of 10 years.

Overall

, the

park

has been modernized, there have been some new facilities added to the

area

while

some

space

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have been expanded noticeably. 10 years ago, the

park

was undeveloped with unused spaces and

little

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amenities. At present, the spare

area

at

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the

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proximity to the Central football pitch has been converted into a picnic

area

. The pond close by has been widened and

evolve

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into a lake for boating. To the bottom right of the

park

, the wooded region 10 years ago was chopped off to make way for the construction of a new Cafe and public toilets. Surrounding the Village

Park

a brand-new path has been built specifically for cycling outside. There

have

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also

been some

noticable

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noticeable

expansion

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within the

park

. The football pitch

remain

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in the central

area

though it has been extended. The car

park

near the entrance which used to only accommodate 20 people now can take up 30 more.

In addition

, the tennis court has been increased twice in size.

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the children's play

area

has been divided equally into a

children

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park

and a children's soft play

area

, though the size still

remain

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unchanged.