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Parents are delaying childbirth nowadays than in the older days. Why is this? Do the advantages of late childbirth outweigh the disadvantages?

#parents #childbirth
In modern society childbirth is often delayed by parents.Some may argue that it is
harmful but
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harmful, but
 in my opinion by doing
this
 father and
mother
 can focus on their career more. By
delying
cause to be slowed down or delayed
delaying
dealing
birth
Suggestion
the birth
 of
child
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a child
children
the child
,
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,
there are
lot
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lots
 of advantages which parents can get.
Firstly
, when respective parents
dely
every day; without missing a day
daily
dearly
birth
 of their
child
,
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,
they get more time to do their job properly.When they have
responsibility
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the responsibility
 of a
child
,
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,
they can not
propery
in the right manner
properly
proper
 focus on their workplace.
As a result
 they perform poorly in their jobs.Another reason benefit of
this
 is by
delaing
cause to be slowed down or delayed
delaying
dealing
child
birth they
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birth, they
 can reduce their cost because a
child
 bring a lot of expense.So by delaying
childbirth parents
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childbirth, parents
 can save more money.
However
,
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,
some people may believe that delaying
child
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
birth
 is harmful for the
mother
.By doing
this
 a
mother
 in
future
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the future
 may not able to give
birth
, as it can bring more complexity.
Moreover
, some
pepple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 argue that when parents take
child
 early soon after their
marraige
the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
marriage
,
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,
it can make father and
mother
 more responsive.When they have a
child
 they act
kore
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
 maturely and the relation between father and
mother
also
 improves. In conclusion
,
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,
Although
 delaying childbirth can bring some problem
,
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,
I think that it has more advantages than
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 disadvantages.

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