Universities should accept equal numbers of men and women in every subject. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Education is considered as necessary requirement for the development of the individual. Some people t
hinks
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think
that same number of men and women take admission in u
niversity
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a university
at particular, branch of studies. In my opinion, I totally disagree with
this
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point as subject choice depend on an individual choice.
To begin
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with, nowadays most of the universities g
ives
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give
opportunity to all men and women to take admission in branch base on their choice and knowledge of the particular subject rather than considering their gender; p
erson
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a person
people
the person
can give more concentration and effort to get success.
For example
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, in past field of nursing only women can p
articipate but,
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participate, but
men
also
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started to participate as per their interest.
Moreover
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,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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