the table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. the charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the Ashdown
Museum
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refurbishment’s before and after year visits. Change preposition
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in both of the given pie charts, the Linking Words
satisfactory
level of the Replace the word
satisfaction
visitors
has been placed based on the results of the surveys.
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the table, the Linking Words
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the prior year of the refurbishment but when the Change preposition
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museum
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number
visitors
increased to 92000. In the previous year, the Use synonyms
amount
of dissatisfied Change the quantifier
number
visitors
was nearly 40% but it decreased drastically to 15% after the required actions were taken to convert Use synonyms
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establishment into a nicely improved one. When the necessary steps were not taken, the visitor's satisfaction was negatively affected Linking Words
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the portion of highly satisfied people was as low as 15%, which later on increased to 35% after the Linking Words
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Museum
got its new modified version.
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At the end
of the above discussion, it can be concluded that the refurbishment of Linking Words
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Museum
paid off really well, just as it was expected to perform.Use synonyms
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