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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories.Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while other consider photographs to be irrefutable.Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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With the development of media, the past decades have seen that there was an increasing number of access of information using photographs to support their news.
However
, it is widely debated whether the stories photo showing is true and reliable.
This
 essay will argue that there are more stories behind
photographs
Suggestion
the photographs
 than
it
it is
it's
 shown. Admittedly,
journalits
a writer for newspapers and magazines
journalists
journalist
 could argue that the photograph is
most powerful way
Suggestion
the most powerful way
a most powerful way
 to
demonstrates
Suggestion
demonstrate
 truth
directely
without deviation
directly
;
additionally
, there have been an abundance of access to get
infomation
a message received and understood
information
, so it can be used to
scritinize
to look at critically or searchingly, or in minute detail
scrutinize
scrutinise
 news.
Nevertheless
,
although
 there were several methods to
scritinize
to look at critically or searchingly, or in minute detail
scrutinize
 news, it does not mean that people may not be
mislead
Suggestion
misled
. One
indipuatble
not open to question; obviously true
indisputable
fact
 is that some
enterprenuers
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
 have made a monopoly on
media
Suggestion
the media
, which means that they dominate the tendency of reports.
For instance
, in an
autocractic
offensively self-assured or given to exercising usually unwarranted power
autocratic
countries
Suggestion
country
, the dictator has the power to control the
fact
 which their citizens see, though there are lots many resources.
Therefore
,
number
Suggestion
the number
a number
 of access is not the factor to support the truth which photos show.
In addition
 to monopoly of
midia
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
, interested orientation is another factor contributing to
holdwith
Suggestion
hold with
 a
fact
 in
news
Suggestion
the news
, because usually reports will involve in personal opinions. It is difficult to exclude subjective opinions when persons show
a
Suggestion
an
 incidence.
Thus
, it is highly likely that the
fact
 is behind the photographs. In conclusion, making photographs unreliable can be contributed to the monopoly of
media
Suggestion
the media
 and interested orientation,
although
 there are plenty of resources to get information.
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