Now a days international tourism is the biggest industry. It creates tension rather than understanding between people from different countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the past decade,

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

has experienced unprecedented success all over the world. A general consensus exists that

this

contributes to stress between nations

instead

of establishing better perception among various cultures. I partially agree with

this

phenomenon

Firstly

, one of the most salient reasons why travelling paves the way of understanding lies in the fact of communication. It is aptly illustrated while communicating and interacting with each

other individuals

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other, individuals

gain an insight of each other's customs.

This

ultimately will foster bilateral friendship along with respect. Another notable point is that

tourism

lays the foundation for fiscal development. With the advent of aggressive marketing,

this

flourishing business has had

inextricable link

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an inextricable link

with a number of associated

business

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businesses

.

This

might range from Airlines to the small gifts-shop in the region.

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Thus, it

had created a cornerstone of employment not only overseas, but

also

in the local areas.

For example

, some Asian

tourists

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tourist

areas have already lifted out the quagmire of poverty.

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It

is estimated that their children would have better education and welcoming attitudes towards the foreigners visiting their places. On no account, the vast majority of people should have experienced any pressure in

this

regard Despite the above, valid reasons

exists why

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exists, why

a tension may emerge

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Unfortunately, there are those in the minority group obsessed with huge financial gain by criminal activities. Smuggling, for an example, is taking the opportunity of the ubiquitous entry into the region. If

this

situation continues, the dire consequences might have created.

Although

precautions are available, individual worries whether

government

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the government

can demonstrate the aptitude.

Furthermore

,

tourism

is often deemed as a mode of cultural invasion.

Although

, the advent of social media is potentially dominating the concern,

tourism

could be associated. To conclude,

tourism

is vastly fostering friendship and understanding among persons. The

unwelcoming

drawbacks of illicit

products transportation

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products, transportation

can easily be countered by competent security services in the port- premises.

Likewise

, the link of cultural disruption is only a minor fact when compared to the enormous level of perception

tourism

brings among the individuals