Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more houses. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside. What is your opinion?

many
Suggestion
Many
countries are experiencing
population growth more
Suggestion
population growth, more
houses are needed to be built and those houses needs to be
devided
separated into parts or pieces
divided
decided
devised
in
Suggestion
into
towns and
countryside
...
towns
Suggestion
Town
Towns
Town's
houses
has
Suggestion
have
more advantage than
countryside
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
can always find a near hospital
,
Accept space
,
schools
,
Accept space
,
universities, and more materials than
countryside
Suggestion
the countryside
...
on
Suggestion
On
the other hand
countryside
houses are very calm and less
poluted
rendered unwholesome by contaminants and pollution
polluted
climat
Suggestion
climates
climate

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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