The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph reflects the total
value
evolution, measured in million
dollars
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of dollars
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, of different kinds of products exported by one country between 2000 and 2005. The total
value
of exports has not been constant over the years. In 2000 the total
value
obtained was 300000 million dollars, but the tendency until 2002 has been decreasing, achieving a final
value
of 250000 for that year. During the
last
four years, the total
value
has grown up, reaching the figure of 425000 million dollars in 2005.
On the other hand
, the
value
of food has been slightly constant, with a total benefit considerably lower in comparison to other exports.
Fuel
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The fuel
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plot was always
descendant
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descending
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with respect to the first year.
On the contrary
, manufactured goods have had an irregular behaviour, starting with a total
value
slower than fuel, but overcoming it in 2005. In conclusion, the
value
exports
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of exports
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have been slightly different for
for
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each product, being manufactured goods the one that has the more optimistic growth. From the total side, the benefits have increased sharply since 2002.

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