some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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schools are held responsible for teaching a lot of things to children.
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age. Children start understanding good and bad at early childhood, when they are still too young to attend
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. The teaching of how to be a good member of
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responsibly
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why some people believe schools should be responsible for teaching the importance and difference of being a good citizen or a bad one.
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, if young boys and girls have not been familiar with the idea of good and bad in family, they would not act
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. In conclusion, I think kids should start learning about good and bad from their own parents in their early ages, while
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role models
  • moral values
  • social norms
  • structured environment
  • cooperation
  • respect
  • communal responsibilities
  • decision-making
  • societal integration
  • consistent messages
  • cultural expectations
  • complementary roles
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