The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The charts show the percentage breakdown of
government
spending across nine categories in 2010 and 2015. Over the five-year period, there were significant changes in
expenditure
. In both years, the four largest
areas
of
government
expenditure
were
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education, healthcare, pensions, and defence, with education taking the largest share (24% in 2010 and 21% in 2015). The smallest
areas
of
expenditure
were transport, culture and leisure and "other". Interest
on
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borrowing and spending on welfare lay in between. Interestingly, between 2010 and 2015, spending on all four of the largest
areas
had dropped, with the exception of pensions, which remained the same at 19%. Spending on transport and culture and leisure
also
fell significantly, with the transport budget declining by
two thirds
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.
On the other hand
, spending on welfare and interest on
government
borrowing rose markedly, with the latter doubling over the five-year period to 10%.
Overall
, the charts indicate that the
government
has had to cut
expenditure
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in most
areas
in order to fund the cost of borrowing and welfare.
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