Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

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Youth unemployment is certainly a worrying challenge for most
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, especially at a time of economic instability and social unrest.
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, to say that
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is the largest issue is to overlook a range of equally pressing matters, as we will discuss now. It must be admitted that joblessness can undermine a young person’s economic prospects and consequent social mobility.
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,
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issue can be ameliorated by coordinated action between the state and the private sector, as we have seen,
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, in Canada recently. When
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is realized, we can see that other concerns are at least as serious. Foremost among these is perhaps the issue of age demographics, whereby young
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bear the burden
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an increasingly elderly population with high longevity.
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means that young
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will pay higher taxes and work longer hours, possibly forcing them to migrate to
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where
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pressure is lower. The effect of
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is the ‘brain drain’ situation which can be seen in southern Europe, where young, ambitious
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prefer to leave their
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altogether, exacerbating the problem for those remaining.
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, we must remember that a substantial proportion of young
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globally face existential threats
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as famine, drought or outbreaks of disease. These problems are often caused by (or are compounded by) civil war, political instability or the corruption of
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in power locally.
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risks are a danger to their safety
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to their livelihood, and so would appear to be far more serious than unemployment.
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, it seems logical to accept that joblessness is a major challenge for young
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.
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, persistent trends in demographics among developed
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and the presence of physical dangers in developing
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should be regarded as at least as severe.
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