In the recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Now a day life style of people very changed. Every

changes

Suggestion

change

brings some positive and negative impacts on our life. Advance in

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

and facilities our shopping

habbits

an established custom

habits

habitats

hobbits

are

also

changed. In the

past there

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past, there

were small shops people used to do shopping from there. But now due to opening to huge shopping styles people interested to go these malls. As

refers to the speaker or writer

told before every change brings good and bad

consequences so i

Suggestion

consequences, so I

consequences so I

prefer to discuss good impact of opening

Suggestion

big shopping malls.

First

of all in big shopping malls we have so many choices for purchasing.

For

example different

Accept comma addition

example, different

brands of clothings for males,

femals

an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)

females

and kids as well. So

this

safe our

time

to shop every

things

Suggestion

thing

under one

rouf

a protective covering that covers or forms the top of a building

roof

Secondly in

Accept comma addition

Secondly, in

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

malls

also

have many other facilities to attract customers like

food court

Suggestion

a food court

for families and youngsters, play land for kids, cinemas for family and youth and

also

so many other options. So people go there for

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

shipping

and

also

hang out, fun and to pass leisure

time

with their friends and family. Shopping malls are very good places for leisure

time but

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time, but

also hve

Suggestion

also has

also have

bad impact

Suggestion

a bad impact

bad impacts

on small businesses. In the

past there

Accept comma addition

past, there

were so many shops in small towns and

cities but

Accept comma addition

cities, but

now these

samll

limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent

small

businesses are closed because people prefer to go to malls. These

mall

Suggestion

malls

also

affecting our youth

becase

for the reason that; on account of

because

after college and university students go to

shoping mall

Suggestion

the shopping mall

shopping mall

a shopping mall

shopping malls

to watch movies or to pass

there

of them or themselves

their

leisure

time

. So they do not spend

time

for

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

their academic career will be affected. In

conclusion I

Accept comma addition

conclusion, I

believe that

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

malls are

good idea

Suggestion

a good idea

good ideas

for shopping because they provide

good environment

Suggestion

a good environment

and facilities

Suggestion

for

customer. But these are

also

affecting small businesses and youth. So we should

utilized

Suggestion

utilize

every

facilities

Suggestion

facility

in a moderate manner.

Sun Feb 02 2020

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In the recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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