In the recent years, many small shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Now a day life style of people very changed. Every

changes

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change

brings some positive and negative impacts on our life. Advance in

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

and facilities our shopping

habbits

an established custom

habits

habitats

hobbits

are

also

changed. In the

past there

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past, there

were small shops people used to do shopping from there. But now due to opening to huge shopping styles people interested to go these malls. As

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

told before every change brings good and bad

consequences so i

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consequences, so I

consequences so I

prefer to discuss good impact of opening

to

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in

big shopping malls.

First

of all in big shopping malls we have so many choices for purchasing.

For

example different

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example, different

brands of clothings for males,

femals

an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)

females

and kids as well. So

this

safe our

time

to shop every

things

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thing

under one

rouf

a protective covering that covers or forms the top of a building

roof

.

Secondly in

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Secondly, in

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

malls

also

have many other facilities to attract customers like

food court

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a food court

for families and youngsters, play land for kids, cinemas for family and youth and

also

so many other options. So people go there for

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

shipping

and

also

hang out, fun and to pass leisure

time

with their friends and family. Shopping malls are very good places for leisure

time but

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time, but

it

also hve

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also has

also have

bad impact

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a bad impact

bad impacts

on small businesses. In the

past there

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past, there

were so many shops in small towns and

cities but

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cities, but

now these

samll

limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent

small

businesses are closed because people prefer to go to malls. These

mall

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malls

also

affecting our youth

becase

for the reason that; on account of

because

after college and university students go to

shoping mall

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the shopping mall

shopping mall

a shopping mall

shopping malls

to watch movies or to pass

there

of them or themselves

their

leisure

time

. So they do not spend

time

for

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

their academic career will be affected. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

believe that

shoping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

malls are

good idea

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a good idea

good ideas

for shopping because they provide

good environment

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a good environment

and facilities

to

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for

customer. But these are

also

affecting small businesses and youth. So we should

utilized

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utilize

every

facilities

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facility

in a moderate manner.