In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Every country has some billionaires who earn a staggering
amount
of money. While some opine, it is beneficial for a county, others demand governmental intervention to limit the renumeration
people can earn. a numbered list
enumeration
However
, I disfavored
the state of being out of favor
disfavoured
such
irrational paradigm, and people should be free to make money according to their skills and abilities.
On the one hand, it is thought that a few wealthy people of a country can transfigure common people 's lives by investing smartly. Because renowned business tycoons or entrepreneurs are the individuals who earn exorbitant
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an exorbitant amount
amount
of salaries compare to
wages a common man. These people, being business minded, can obviously Suggestion
with
endeavor
for the a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
walfare
of local people, and they can governmental provision of economic assistance to persons in need
welfare
also
earn by their services. For instance
, launching of Jio, a mobile network, by one of the wealthiest persons of India - Mr. Mukesh Ambani. Services
of Jio are way cost-effective in terms of SMS, VOICE, and Internet packs. I short, it can be argued it was Mr. Ambani who brought digital revolution in India. Suggestion
The services
Such
services were extremely pricey in the past, but Mr. Ambani invested billions of dollars for this
feat and now earning even more.
A growing number of people, on the other hand
, opine that government ought to take control of the wages people earn in different fields. They believe that by setting a certain limit in the pay an enormous amount
of money can be saved which will be deposited in exchequer
, and can be used for people in Suggestion
the exchequer
destination
, unemployment and Suggestion
the destination
unpreviledged
. To illustrate the point, most of doctors earn average ₹1 Lac, and ₹50000 is enough to suffice all basic needs, also
they can enjoy many luxurious in ₹50000 monthly income. If government spends remaining ₹5000 to help augment salaries of people who work hard yet they
earn less than they deserve. Suggestion
hard, yet they
Such
as, a farmer in an impecunious situation.
I am of the opinion that, people should be free to earn as per their expertise, knowledge and capacities. Imposing any form of restrictions on earnings would be unfair and that may result into
discrimination and many Suggestion
in
haphazards
. Salary limitations, dependent upon or characterized by chance
haphazard
therefore
, would be an inappropriate initiative.
In conclusion, some people favor
promote over another
favour
progress
of some people, who earn Suggestion
the progress
uncomparatively
high salaries, because they can contribute in
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to
country's welfare
, and others aspire of imposing governmental restrictions Suggestion
the country's welfare
in
people's earnings as remaining Suggestion
on
amount
can be saved to bridge gap between thw
rich and the poor. definite article
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Nevertheless
, I believe, in democratic nation every one
is free to work and earn.all people
everyone
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