Nowadays the ways people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The
technology
has
great impact
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a great impact
on
individual's life
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an individual's life
the individual's life
. The bonding between people is
also
affected due to
this
evolvement
the act of sharing in the activities of a group
involvement
of
technology
. In my opinion,
such
development deter
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development, deter
the relationship of a person at great extent which is explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with,
influence
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the influence
of the
technology
on
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of
the people brings many opportunities to contact other in any corner of the world. Due to extensive
use
of the Internet habituate a person to
use
social media and video call to contact his friends and family.
Moreover
, in professional life people
use
email for effective
communication
and all
this
plural of "this"
these
facilities are available at very low cost.
As a result
, many people spend their major time on
such
things and they think that
technology
is a boon for them.
However
, extreme
use
of
technology
only for
communication
may
deteriorat
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorate
individual's productivity and
also
introduce potential danger to his life. Nowadays, many employees
use
social media during their working ours to get in touch with
teir
of them or themselves
their
kith and kins, but
this
practive
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
will reduce their productivity at work. The IIM researchers had done
survey
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a survey
on
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of
Indian employees and their results surprised everyone that 60% workers were using their phones and computers for personal
use
,
hence
the average productivity of the firms reduced
upto
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up to
30%.
Furthermore
, unrestricted
communication
by the Internet is more
cruicial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
for the teenagers where they may get
incontact
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in contact
with strangers through fake social media profile, which is the most common cause for their exploitation.
Thus
, if the development in
technology
is not used wisely, it brings many problems to the individual. In conclusion, the
communication
by
technology
is very essential for the people for their emotional health, but it should be restricted
upto
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up to
certain level
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a certain level
. The government should start
awareness campaign
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an awareness campaign
through TV
advetisement
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
, poster or newsletters so people can improve their way of
communication
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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