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Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

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The chart illustrates changes in the
percentage
 of daily recommended fruits and
vegetable
 consumed in the UK over the
period
 2002, 2006, and 2010. Overall, women were the greatest fruit and
vegetable
 consumers,
however
, children’s figures were the lowest over the entire research
period
. As clearly seen from the graph, in the year 2002, female consumed the greatest
percentage
 of daily recommended fruits and vegetables at 25%. The figure increased significantly to 32% in 2006,
however
, the women’s
percentage
 of daily recommended fruit and
vegetable
 decreased at the end of the research
period
 at 26%. The children’s fruit and
vegetable
 consumption
percentage
 had a similar trend with its females. The figures of children rose from 11% in 2002 and 18% in 2006, and fell gradually to 16% in 2010.
However
, the males
ate
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 the similar amount of fruits and
vegetable
 over the research
period
 at around a quarter of
daily
Suggestion
the daily
 recommended.
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