In some countries most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantageous and disadvantages of renting.

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It's undoubtedly true
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that in some countries people prefer to live in
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rent
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a rent house
house
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and
this
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trend have been going popular in some countries rather than buying own houses. There are lots of reasons behind
this
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.
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of all
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a huge number of people say that today it's too difficult to buy
own
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owner
houses because of the inflation rate has been increased and they say that their salaries is not enough to buy houses
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, in today's modern world
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,
it's too difficult to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
basic amenities of life
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,
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they forcefully to do
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. From my perspective
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there are some advantages and disadvantages
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as
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,
those people who live in
rent
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house
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they face lots of trouble
.
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.
When they live in
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rent
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a rent house
house
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during they must have to follow of their
house
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owners which are mostly too hard.
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, if they broke
some thing
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something, then
something then
then
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they must to double pay fine.
Besides
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, certain time
house
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owners try to increase
hig
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
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rent
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rental
fees.
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the contrary
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,
if they try to buy their
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house
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house, then
then
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they certainly will not face these
problems
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problems, thus
thus
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their money will not spend more as that they spend on
rent
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houses.
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, in own
house
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every one
all people
everyone
can comfortably and happily live. They can provide all things to their
children which
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children, which
is impossible in
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rent
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a rent house
house
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. To summarise, own
house
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have
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has
lots of benefits rather
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
rent
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houses.
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