In some countries most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantageous and disadvantages of renting.

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It's undoubtedly true

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that in some countries people prefer to live in

rent

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a rent house

house

and

this

trend have been going popular in some countries rather than buying own houses. There are lots of reasons behind

this

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First

of all

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a huge number of people say that today it's too difficult to buy

own

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owner

houses because of the inflation rate has been increased and they say that their salaries is not enough to buy houses

similarly

, in today's modern world

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it's too difficult to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

basic amenities of life

therefore

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they forcefully to do

this

. From my perspective

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there are some advantages and disadvantages

such

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those people who live in

rent

house

they face lots of trouble

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When they live in

rent

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a rent house

house

during they must have to follow of their

house

owners which are mostly too hard.

Secondly

, if they broke

some thing

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something, then

something then

then

they must to double pay fine.

Besides

, certain time

house

owners try to increase

hig

greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount

high

rent

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rental

fees.

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the contrary

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if they try to buy their

house

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house, then

then

they certainly will not face these

problems

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problems, thus

thus

their money will not spend more as that they spend on

rent

houses.

In addition

, in own

house

every one

all people

everyone

can comfortably and happily live. They can provide all things to their

children which

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children, which

is impossible in

rent

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a rent house

house

. To summarise, own

house

have

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has

lots of benefits rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

rent

houses.

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In some countries most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantageous and disadvantages of renting.

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