*Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social,and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?*

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are the upcoming citizens as well as the future determiners of our economy.Nowadays Children's are facing extreme pressure in most aspects of life. In
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essay we will discuss the reasons behind these pressures and the possible solutions to alleviate the mental dilemmas. In the present day world, Children's face more mental and physical torture from institutions. The academic curriculum is so vast that even the bag with books is heavier than the student. Daily homework and timetable for studies has left no or limited scope for spending time outdoors. Another major concern is the societal and commercial implications. Parents usually set a role model for their
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and they expect them to become like that.
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a strain in their mind as it may not be the area of their interest.
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struggle to get along with their parents wish. Commercial pressure
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adds the stress as children's try to adapt themselves to the global culture while parents who have known the world better and rely more on t
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the traditional methods struggle
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affects badly as usually children's get mentally disturbed when they can't compete with their peers. Parents are always the
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and best teachers of a
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. The major concerns will get resolved if children's find comfort in discussing their issues with parents.
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the school curriculum
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some time
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promote healthier discussions in school. To sum up, it's true that children are facing pressures from academic, social and commercial perspectives while there are ways to minimize these concerns and bring up their confidence. The parents,
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