These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures; while other claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

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Today the universities offer courses in two ways - one is the

coventional

following accepted customs and proprieties

conventional

classroom

teaching or lectures and the other is the online teaching. In my

opinion both

Accept comma addition

opinion, both

the ways of teaching

has

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have

its own advantages and disadvantages. Online teaching is usually

prefered

more desirable than another

preferred

prepared

by students who do not have the

time

to attend a

classroom

teaching as they are full

time

employees and they want to balance both work and study.

For example

, When I was doing an internship

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Siemens, I had opted for

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online

course

as it was easier for me to study and work at the same

time

Although

, there is a disadvantage that the student could miss out on certain information if he is not judiciously checking the information about the

course

homework or any other important announcements.

Also

, it can be difficult to get clarification on any doubts, as it would require follow

ups

Suggestion

with the professor through emails.

That is

the reason why a lot of people prefer conventional

classroom

teaching. The conventional

classroom

teaching

Suggestion

teacher

prefered

more desirable than another

preferred

by people who have the ample amount of

time

to attend the lecture. An advantage is that a student will not miss out on any

informartion

a message received and understood

information

and can ask the question or clarify the doubts in the

class

itself which can save

time

For example

, I had a

course

called advanced

statisticsand

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statistics and

I knew that

classroom

teaching was better as I could understand the concepts and I could ask my doubts and clarify them in the

class

itself.

However

, the disadvantage with

this

teaching method is that it can be difficult for someone who is a full

time

employee and will have to take out

time

to commute and attend the

class

and there is a need to arrive to the

class

at a particular

time

which is not there in case of online courses. There are pros and cons associated with both the teaching methods. It ultimately depends on the person and his or her needs based on which he or she would choose the appropriate teaching method for the

course

. Both the options are good as one offers a lot of flexibility and the other offers a better

clearity

free from obscurity and easy to understand; the comprehensibility of clear expression

clarity

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

364 words

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