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Some people think it’s better to choose friends, who always have the same opinions as them other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some persons say that the best friend is the one who agrees with you the most of
time
Suggestion
the time
, but some feel that only in a disagreement the true
friendship
is exists
Suggestion
exists
.
Although
 contacts with your buddies should bring you a relief from your problems, I feel that the true friend will help you to see your problems from a different angle. It is often argued that you should stick to a mate that always agree with you. They say that buddies should be a fresh air for you after your work day or a home routine and
an
Suggestion
a
any
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
 kind of disagreement with each other could be stressful or even painful.
For example
, my friend from the town where I was born always said that I am the best mate of all because I didn’t blame him no matter what he did and agreed with his opinion all the time. Despite
this
, I would argue that contrast point of views
only strengthen
Suggestion
only strengthens
 a
friendship
 ties and helps to see problems in
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 shape. It is often happened that people try not to argue with a someone if they are not
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 close or they are don’t want to argue and
as a result
 only the closest person will say that you are wrong.
For instance
, the survey recently made by Cosmopolitan journal showed that the most long-living
friendship
 ties between people was among mates who argue a lot. In conclusion, some people believe that they should surround themselves with people that agree with them and the others say that only a person that says opposite opinion cares about you. Despite a
friendship
 should be
recreational
Suggestion
recreated
, I believe that only the closest mate will argue with you.

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