Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie ? What factors contribute to the success of a movie ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When we say
film
the
first
thing in our mind is Hollywood and expensive
film
production. Every time when
new
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a new film
film
is presented
one
of
important information
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the important information
about
movie
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the movie
a movie
is how much it cost and the
secound
coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude
second
one
which actors have been acted. Of course, some actors are more expensive
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
others and it is important things for movies lovers. Some movies are popular just because of
actors
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the actors
. If public hear that Bred Pitt acted in some
film
it is pretty sure that the
movie
will be successful and expensive
also
. Does expensive
movie
mean successful
movie
? I think it is not the rule. There are many films recorded in
one
room and with just two actors and it had
strong influence
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a strong influence
on public and got
award
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an award
the award
on
film
festivals. Sometimes, success is just because of
original
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the original story
story
or because it is about
current topic
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current topics
a current topic
in global society. The success of a
movie
depend
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depends
on many factors. In my opinion
story
and the way of
story telling
The act or practice of telling stories
storytelling
is
rhe
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the
most important factor.
For example
, there are movies with
great idea
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a great idea
and
story but
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story, but
during the
movie
people lose motivation to watch it. It happened that the end of
movie
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the movie
a movie
is meaningless and people were disappointed. In that case, it looks like producer hurried to finish the
movie
. Movies based on true
story
are interesting because
public
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the public
have in mind that it really happened and it can increase art effect. New
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
film
“Pihu” is
movie
about
little girl
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a little girl
little girls
, 2 years old, which stayed alone at home with her dead mother. Public assessed
this
movie
as the most stressful in modern society and it is recorded in
one
apartment with two actors.
Also
, the little girl was not famous
actor but
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actor, but
on the other
side it
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side, it
was a big challenge to work with kid and gain sense of
true
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true stories
a true story
story
. People want to know details about life of famous persons. In that case, most of people
is interesting
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are interesting
for movies about famous politicians, actors, singers, and so on. “Bohemian rhapsody” is
popular
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a popular movie
movie
because it is
story
about
interesting way
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the interesting way
an interesting way
of living of Freddie Mercury. So, making
movie
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movies
a movie
is really
art
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an art
and it doesn’t depend just on money. It is wide
story
about talent, originality and creativity.

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