Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie ? What factors contribute to the success of a movie ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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When we say

film

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the

first

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thing in our mind is Hollywood and expensive

film

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production. Every time when

new

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a new film

film

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is presented

one

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important information

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the important information

about

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movie

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the movie

a movie

is how much it cost and the

secound

coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude

second

one

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which actors have been acted. Of course, some actors are more expensive

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

others and it is important things for movies lovers. Some movies are popular just because of

actors

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the actors

. If public hear that Bred Pitt acted in some

film

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it is pretty sure that the

movie

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will be successful and expensive

also

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. Does expensive

movie

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mean successful

movie

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? I think it is not the rule. There are many films recorded in

one

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room and with just two actors and it had

strong influence

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a strong influence

on public and got

award

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an award

the award

film

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festivals. Sometimes, success is just because of

original

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the original story

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or because it is about

current topic

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current topics

a current topic

in global society. The success of a

movie

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depend

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depends

on many factors. In my opinion

story

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and the way of

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story telling

The act or practice of telling stories

storytelling

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the

most important factor.

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, there are movies with

great idea

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a great idea

and

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story but

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story, but

during the

movie

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people lose motivation to watch it. It happened that the end of

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movie

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the movie

a movie

is meaningless and people were disappointed. In that case, it looks like producer hurried to finish the

movie

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. Movies based on true

story

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are interesting because

public

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the public

have in mind that it really happened and it can increase art effect. New

indian

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

film

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“Pihu” is

movie

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about

little girl

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a little girl

little girls

, 2 years old, which stayed alone at home with her dead mother. Public assessed

this

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movie

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as the most stressful in modern society and it is recorded in

one

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apartment with two actors.

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, the little girl was not famous

actor but

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actor, but

on the other

side it

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side, it

was a big challenge to work with kid and gain sense of

true

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true stories

a true story

story

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. People want to know details about life of famous persons. In that case, most of people

is interesting

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are interesting

for movies about famous politicians, actors, singers, and so on. “Bohemian rhapsody” is

popular

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a popular movie

movie

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because it is

story

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about

interesting way

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the interesting way

an interesting way

of living of Freddie Mercury. So, making

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movie

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movies

a movie

is really

art

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an art

and it doesn’t depend just on money. It is wide

story

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about talent, originality and creativity.

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Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie ? What factors contribute to the success of a movie ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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according to raise population, government have to find alterantive food resource like insects product in order to strike balance betwenn supply and demand while group of people have notion that consuming its is not appropriate for human health and having hazardous effect on environment.

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country Task :

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