You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. In your letter - explain why you changed jobs - describe your new job - tell him your ither news

Dear Nevena, I want to share something with you! I have
new
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a new job
job
, can you believe? As you know I was interesting for new
job
opportunities and it was very difficult in my country. My colleague recommended me to one new company, so I was involved in
selection process
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the selection process
and
finally
got a
job
. Now, I work as
Manager
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a Manager
in Centre for
children
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child
protection and I am really satisfied with. You know that I like my previous
job but
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job, but
during the time it
becames
enter or assume a certain state or condition
becomes
became
hard. I was feeling very exhausted. I mentioned you that the work atmosphere was not good for me. I was frustrated while I was working there. It had
bad influence
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a bad influence
on my health. The
secondly
,
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,
my salary during the years was the same. It didn t make sense anymore. In my new company there are many creative and generous
colleageus
an associate that one works with
colleagues
colleague
. I have been learnig since the
first
day

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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