You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to thank you for your restaurant, we were welcomed warmly by your friendly staff.
excellent
service, delicious food and Correct article usage
the excellent
nice
environment that you provided for my birthday on February, 5.
When we arrivedCorrect article usage
the nice
Change preposition
at
Correct your spelling
Whatever
What ever
we asked was served by your staff Correct your spelling
Whatever
on
the right time. Change preposition
at
Furthermore
, All my friends
admired the table, which was designed perfectly, on the corner for us . We really like beef tenderloin with fresh salad and absolutely Add a hyphen
mind-blowing
mind- blowing
. Correct your spelling
mind-blowing
Similarly
, the birthday cake that was served is the best one that I have ever eaten.
I thought that small
suggestion would contribute Correct article usage
a small
your
fine place. You may add the calories list along with the food. Because two of Change preposition
to your
friends
, who are on diet, asked the calories list of food. One more thing is that the parking area of Correct pronoun usage
my friends
back
of the restaurant was really dark and soAdd an article
the back
,
if you add lighting there, it makes it easy for the customer to park their cars.
I and my Remove the comma
apply
friends
enjoyed thoroughly
there and Correct pronoun usage
it thoroughly
therefore
; I will definitely recommend your restaurant to my other friends
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,