Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?

In the recent years, thanks to the development of global trade, consumers have many opportunities to buy similar products from different nations around the world. In my opinion,
this
development
bring
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brings
out positive and negative effects which will be discussed below. On the one hand, the growth of the global mass production has good impacts
for
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of
both people and economic development. On an individual level, people can easily
to find
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find
the same products via apps or websites and get delivery at
door
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the door
. Most buyers love
this
way of shopping because they have
variety
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a variety
of choices with reasonable price.
For example
, the competition between famous brand
such
as Nike and Adidas helps sport lovers get
more good
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better
items associated new technologies with low cost. From an economic perspective, exporting is now making up a large proportion in GDP contribution. Due to the globalized commerce expansion, people in the world now can enjoy special tropical fruits from Vietnam
such
as
jackfruit
, dragon fruit, guava… and in other way around,
Vietnamese
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the Vietnamese
can
also
easily access many kinds of quality products from Germany, Japan… From all trade exchange activities, our country has been developing very rapidly with many potential exporting advantages.
On the other hand
, despites of some benefits of mass production there still
has
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have
several drawbacks. People are concerned about the loss of native culture, traditions and heritage.
For instance
, a big number of youngsters in big
cites
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
in my country loves to wear catchy popular mix-up clothes, drink Starbucks like their American idols
instead
of wearing clothes made from domestic brands. Another negative thing
of
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about
globalization process is that the massive availability of imported goods from everywhere
pose
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poses
a threat on local products. The medium and small enterprises (SMEs) might be closed down or swallowed by big corporations.
This
could be a serious problem for
whole economy
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the whole economy
whole economies
. In conclusion, the globalization phenomenon
obviously have
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obviously has
has obviously had
both pros and cons and it is very important to
balance both sides to
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balance both sides
ensure a strong sustainable economy with interesting cultural heritages.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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