There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

Global temperatures are rising throughout the years and one obvious growing evident is that it is caused by man-made activities. Sensitive topic

such

as

this

requires our genuine concern and appropriate action. As I look into

this

, I find that there are a few causes leading to

this

issue and I will state them below. To start

of

from a particular thing or place or position

off

, the business mind of human beings

are often causing

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is often causing

is often caused

the environment serious damage. People have been cutting off trees for their logs, construction material, furniture and paper making.

Besides

that, referencing to the recent Australia forest fire, 24 people are caught suspected to

lit

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light

the forest for their own convenience and causes a huge outbreak of uncontrollable flames around the country. These

action

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actions

are one of the main

cause

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causes

to

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of

global warming because the trees

helps

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help

to absorb CO2 and release them as oxygen that helps cool down the air.

Hence

, less tree

also

means more heat trapped on earth while burning

also

increases temperature. Another reason is that, people are always looking for

convenience especially

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convenience, especially

in the agriculture

field

. We can take

paddy

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the paddy field, for

the paddy field for

field

for instance

, after harvesting the crops, farmers usually lit the fire and burn the

field

to get rid of everything on it by saving cost and time.

However

,

this

activity

clearly lead

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clearly leads

to more heat generated by the CO2 released and from the burning flames. In conclusion, with an influential issue

such

as

this

, a

soulution

a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution

solution

is much needed.

Government

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The government

should start applying restrictions on logging activities and make replanting a compulsory act in the industry. Other than that, forest and

field

burning should

also

be banned in all countries and those who fail to obey the rules should face

serious penalty

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serious penalties

a serious penalty

.