The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates six different
energy
sources of energy
consumption
in the United States from 1980 and 2013, and projected consumption
to 2030.
It is clear that
petrol and oil are the domain energy
sources and expected
to rise in the future. Add a missing verb
are expected
By contrast
, hydropower, nuclear and solar/wind consume the lowest amount of energy
from 1980 and expected
to hold steady in the coming years. The other two sources of Add a missing verb
are expected
energy
, coal and natural gas
, have similar energy
consumption
over the period.
In 1980, the
petrol and oil was the main source of Correct article usage
apply
energy
in the US, consuming 35 quadrillion
(Change to a plural noun
quadrillions
q
) units. Despite
, there was a bit Correct pronoun usage
thisDespite
fluctuation
from 1980 to 2000. But after that, the Change preposition
of fluctuation
consumption
increased consistent
and is Change the word
consistently
assume
to Wrong verb form
assumed
inclined
to 45q in 2030. Add a missing verb
be inclined
In
Change preposition
On
Correct article usage
the other
other hand
, hydropower, nuclear and solar/wind was Change the wording
another hand
other hands
in
the same level in 1980, which Change preposition
at
lower
than 5q. The use of Nuclear raised a bit to 5q after 1985. The other two Add a missing verb
was lower
were slightly fluctuates
around 5q. Change the verb form
were slightly fluctuated
were slightly fluctuating
Overall
, all three flatten out the period in projection.
Consumption
of energy
of
coal and natural Change preposition
from
gas
maintain
its Change the verb form
maintains
second
and third
position throughout the period. In 1980, the used
of coal (16q) is lower than natural Replace the word
use
gas
(20q). However
, coal increased its consumption
in 1990 , then
it plateaued for the next
5 years, after which, it started to ascend. It is predicted that the consumed
of coal may surpass natural Replace the word
consumption
gas
in 2030, add-up
to nearly 30q.Correct your spelling
add up
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, gas, q with synonyms.
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