What are your career aspirations upon graduation of the degree-programme? Please describe, how are you going to secure these your career-goals? How do you see your career to progress over the next five years?

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I have still a great thirst for higher education. My aim is to do a Master's in entrepreneurship. I want to achieve

the highest

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higher

the higher

education in some

business

& Management subject to make myself competent enough to build a good and lucrative future of my dreams. Upon graduation from

business

school, I was offered a job in the pharmaceutical sector at middle-level management.

This

is where I learned how to apply the principles and lessons of management to real life. It was fascinating and transformed my interest in entrepreneurship research into a passion. I read extensively, trying to keep myself informed about entrepreneurs thinking in my areas of work. By going

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into

great depth and findings, I realized that I should go abroad for higher studies because the methods and facilities available here are

scare

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scared

to help me in competing for the challenges of the growing world. My

first

and foremost goal is to achieve

this

degree so that I will be able to capture the entrepreneurial opportunities in my country by establishing my own

business

of international standards. After that, I

further

plan to expand that

business

at the national and international levels. In the future, I want to become an employer and to provide jobs. I think in

this

way I can help my country to reduce the unemployment rate that helps my country people to lead a good and meaningful life.

Furthermore

, It will give tangible and intangible rewards like independence, flexibility, power, and monetary reward.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

249 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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What are your career aspirations upon graduation of the degree-programme? Please describe, how are you going to secure these your career-goals? How do you see your career to progress over the next five years?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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