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Some students work while studying this often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the cause of this? What solution can you suggest?

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Nowadays, many students
work
 while studying.
Although
this
 tendency may lead to negative results. The numbers of young people who sacrifice
education
 for
work
 is growing. I believe that
this
problem
 has certain causes and can solve by taking special measures. To start with, it is apparent that most of the students who
work
 have many financial expenses to meet. One common cause of high cost of
education
.
Moreover
,
universities and colleges high
Accept comma addition
universities, colleges and high
universities colleges and high
 tuition fees, some family cannot afford higher
education
 for their children. The other causes is living expenses. Many students stay away from hometown, and have to pay for accommodation, food, entertainment.
On the other hand
, I can suggest two possible
solution
Suggestion
solutions
 to
this
problem
.
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
 the government could make higher
education
 free.
For instance
,
this
 result can be achieved by financing
education
 from the country's budget.
Secondly
, promoting unpaid e-learning
such
 from
education
 doesn't require a lot of resources to be maintained. It
make
Suggestion
makes
 be
easier life
Suggestion
an easier life
 for those students, who face a
numerious
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
problem
 in own life for study. To conclude, I believe that mainly lack of financial resources causes students to
work
, but
this
problem
 solved by lowering the amount of financial expenses has students have to meet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial necessity
  • Tuition
  • Living costs
  • Employability
  • Work experience
  • Under pressure
  • Mismanagement
  • Time-management
  • Academic pursuits
  • Flexible part-time study
  • Financial aid
  • Scholarships
  • Bursaries
  • Collaboration
  • Integrated programs
  • Education
  • Work-life balance
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