Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character trait to what extent do you agree

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Jeans place and prominent and crucial role to influence one's
personality
personality
is Predator mind before we are born which gives a uniqueness many people assume that nothing can be done to
change
the
personality
I partially agree with the given statement and will justify my reasons for
this
big before reaching to final conclusion to embark it is undeniable fact that genes are inherited from parents so some
personality
are
also
called in a child before entering to the world it can
also
be said that the
personality
that parents have
also
found in the child for the more there are higher chances of having similar looks and habits in the child of their according to science 80% of physical mental and social
personality
are transmitted through genes and the rest 20% are based on the bringing as well as the Ambience
however
it is an true that we cannot
change
character trait a person
personality
also
depends on the surrounding they leave a person might developer negative
personality
because of negative influence from the society to
change
this
migrating to a better place can
also
change
the negative
personality
many people
also
have aggressive
personality
which is inherited from jeans but Anger Management help to
change
the
personality

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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