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Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

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Many people consider that riding a
bicycle
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 is the best transport option to commute to different places. Using a
bicycle
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 certainly helps people in staying fit and it
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 plays a crucial role in reducing air pollution, but there are
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 some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the one hand, riding a
bicycle
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 offers many benefits to individual and society as well.
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,
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 work as an exercise for busy professionals and older children.
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, it is found in a research, done by a leading health organization of India, that by riding a
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, a person can burn as much calories as by running on a treadmill.
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, it is a useful option for people who do not like to do exercise or going to the gym.
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, as no fuel is required to ride any
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 so it seems the best
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environmentally
 friendly transport option. Burning of fossil fuel by cars or any other vehicles is the chief reason behind global warming.
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, one problem with riding a
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 is that it is very
time
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 consuming as compared with any other vehicle. In
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 fast pace world, people always look for
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 saving options to commute to offices so that they can spend more and more
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 with family. Another possible issue with
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 is, increased risk
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Of
 accidents. In most of the developing and underdeveloped countries, roads are not designed
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 way that a rider can commute safely in a separate lane,
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, there is always a risk of being hit by reckless drivers of any cars or large vehicles. In conclusion, there are some benefits of riding a
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, but it can
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 lead to increased road accidents and more commute
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.

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