Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Old-age is undoubtedly the most difficult phase of one's life and being able to live it peacefully should be everyone's right. It
bring
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brings
along a lot of challenges for a person, which are not limited to being able to move and take
care
of oneself but
also
has a financial aspect to it. They require nurses who can make sure they're taken
care
off with professionalism and affection. In countries like Britain, the government sometimes takes
care
of the financial aspects of old-age homes where aged people usually go to live along with others of the same age. In my opinion is partially correct on the government's part. In their prime age, these people took
care
of their children and family financially and on a personal level as well. They made sure their children were properly fed and taken
care
off
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of
when they were infants. Now
this
family, in
turn should
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turn, should
also
be responsible in one way or another towards their old parents.
For example
, in my family, one of my aunt left her job to take
care
of her son till the time he went to college. Her son should not only be
thankful but
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thankful, but
should
also
take responsibility of his mother even if she decides to live in an old-age home, either financially or by volunteering his time at that home. I believe,
this
way both the generations pay their dues to the other generation by taking
care
of each other at the age when
their
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they're
required assistance. It makes sure that our society is working in the way God intended.
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