As computer are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for the teacher in the classroom.

There is excessive usage of data processing machine in studies.
Study
related material is available online. That's why very early there is no need of any tutor in the classroom. But partially I
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am disagreeing
have disagreed
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students rely on computers. They can get everything online. Now experienced researchers and other educational department uploads their videos in an easy way. So all students try to self
study
through computer. Students can
study
by computer anywhere. Lots of educational applications can be downloaded for
study
. Many pupils are able to get online classes. They can come clear their doubts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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