Thw bar charts show the marriage and divorce statistics of nine countries from 1981-1994
There are two bar charts, one depicting marriage and the other illustrating
divorce
per thousand
people
in eight different countries
over a period of 13 years.
From the marriage bar chart
it can be seen that in all the Add a comma
,chart
countries
the marriage rates had come down, except in Denmark, where it increased. Across
the years the USA had seen Change preposition
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maximum
number Correct article usage
the maximum
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of
people
getting married among the given countries
; a little more than 10 people
in every thousand
used to get married in 1981. Even though the number reduced in 1994, still US
was leading with 9 Correct article usage
the US
people
getting married per thousand
. Denmark was next
in the queue for the same year with six people
marrying out of a thousand
.
Divorce
chart shows that in five out of eight Correct article usage
The divorce
countries
divorce
rates increased from 1981. Germany had a stable number of divorce
cases, that is
, two per thousand
, whereas
, Denmark and the USA saw a decreasing trend. Though Italy’s divorce
rates are very minimal, with less than 0.1% across
the years, Change preposition
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but
it has increased more than double.Remove the conjunction
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