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Thw bar charts show the marriage and divorce statistics of nine countries from 1981-1994

Thw bar charts show the marriage and divorce statistics of nine countries from 1981-1994
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There are two bar charts, one depicting marriage and the other illustrating
divorce
 per
thousand
people
 in eight different
countries
 over a period of 13 years. From the marriage bar
chart
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,chart
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 it can be seen that in all the
countries
 the marriage rates had come down, except in Denmark, where it increased.
Across
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Over
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 the years the USA had seen
maximum
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the maximum
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 number
pf
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of
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people
 getting married among the given
countries
; a little more than 10
people
 in every
thousand
 used to get married in 1981. Even though the number reduced in 1994, still
US
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the US
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 was leading with 9
people
 getting married per
thousand
. Denmark was
next
 in the queue for the same year with six
people
 marrying out of a
thousand
.
Divorce
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The divorce
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 chart shows that in five out of eight
countries
divorce
 rates increased from 1981. Germany had a stable number of
divorce
 cases,
that is
, two per
thousand
,
whereas
, Denmark and the USA saw a decreasing trend. Though Italy’s
divorce
 rates are very minimal, with less than 0.1%
across
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over
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 the years,
but
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apply
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it has increased more than double.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, thousand, people, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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