The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In recent times there has been much debate about the issue of a

ging population

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an aging population

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a soft silver-white univalent element of the alkali metal group; the lightest metal known; occurs in several minerals

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expectancy is rapidly increasing. Some reckon that elderly people might bring tension on the government in terms of paying pensions and providing

health

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care

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treatment, while others state that

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age

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group is of great importance for the country. It seems logical to agree as elderly people might contribute to the

society

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by occupying special work positions and applying their life experience. There are strong reasons for believing that elderly people could affect the pension and

health

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care

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system in the negative way as it has b

ecoming

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become

more complicated for them to proceed working and paying for the decent medical treatment.

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, the problem of taking

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or

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of

elderly people might be a burden for g

overnment

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the government

as in most countries they are obligatory to support them for their daily needs and

health

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.

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forces the state to spend a considerable part of b

udget

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the budget

on

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age

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group

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of investing money to support the development of s

tate.

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the state

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, being fully involved in the social l

ife aging

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life, aging

groups could benefit to the

society

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owing their experience and spare time. Being r

etired they

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retired, they

can occupy

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social positions as babysitting or teacher as their life experience and ability to grown up children might contribute to the

society

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and help young families to raise children.

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, experienced elderly people might be more valued in

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spheres,

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, as medicine or law, where it is essential to know how to solve complex problems and make significant decisions.

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,

last

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year the United Nations published the world

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rating where the Spain took the

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place. N

otably that

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Notably, that

the average

age

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of doctors there is approximately 55 years old.

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case proves us the fact that aging population plays a vital role in the

society

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. To recapitulate, taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, I have all grounds to believe that e

lder

advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people is an essential part of

society

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that not only might take social positions, but

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prolong their proficiency.

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, there is no denying that due to the

age

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the government should support them by paying pensions and providing medical

care

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, but

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burden is funded w

ith

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by

taxes that elderly people had paid before.