Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
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People think that the religious festivals are boring and they do not know why they have to join, so, people usually ignore these days and just enjoy with their friends or family. Because, activities Linking Words
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, our characteristic can be saved. In my view, we need to attend these events, so, these can be alive. Linking Words
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