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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Enhance future life style Is this a negative or positive development?

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Some young adults are under continuous
stress
 to achieve life success. Most parents want their sons and daughters to have a better life than their own, so they push them into stressful
circumstaces
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
 to achieve that desire. I believe
this
circumstances
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circumstance
have
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has
 a negative effect on them considering a harmful
psycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
 development. To start with, one clear reason to bring someone loved under stressful circumstances is to motivate
further
 improvement. Some mothers and fathers believe that excellent grades at school guarantee a better professional future, leading to higher standards of living.
In other words
,
unconfortable stressful
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uncomfortable, stressful
uncomfortable stressful
 conditions are sometimes believed to be necessary for outstanding achievements. In some cases,
nevertheless
,
stress
 has not a positive effect on children’s wellbeing.
Pressure
Suggestion
The pressure
 appears to be connected to
psycologic
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
 issues
such
 as depression, which can be magnified in youth considering their
inmauture
characteristic of a lack of maturity
immature
 mental
trength
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
. One similar fact happens when teenagers are under academical tension to achieve parents’ preferences, and feel the continuous weight over their shoulders.
Finally
, another unfavourable impact is the reject a child can feel against the subject causing him the
stress
. Practice makes
perfection
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perfect
, but forcing someone to
repeatidly
several time
repeatedly
 undertake a certain topic will empower hate against it.
For instance
, many
profesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
 sport athletes stop doing physical exercise once they retire because it was related to
obligation
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the obligation
. Based on
these
denotes a person or thing
this
 reason, it is not a far-fetched conclusion to say that the negative impact
of
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on
 position children under
parents
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parents'
 pressure is considerable. In conclusion, progenitors may push their sons and daughters into harmful
stress
 related positions over time. I still hold the view that modern society should raise youth in a suitable
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
 and avoid negative impacts on their mental health.

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