People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before. Is it a positive or negative development?

Over the past few years because of the expansion of advertising people have

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to buy a lot of goods meanwhile that they have to attempt to earn a large amount of money. I personally believe that buying overdo leads to materialism and there is no room for doubt that

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has a negative development of

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humankind's

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with, the advertising industry has increased the spending culture that caused in meet the needs make hard and put pressure on

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the breadwinner

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, it is difficult to satisfy the various needs and desires that are extended day in, day out, as

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a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

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the exponential ambition it can be a bit daunting. People

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achieving to any things unconsciously tend to want more and more things that

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is maybe out of their power bound and it

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makes

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depressed

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, an assuming people expect more than their duo that it annoys surrounding people

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they can find contentment in living a simple

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and even close themselves to nature and its beauties

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of spending money on some stuff. Aside from its negative consequences on living expenses and way of

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more incomes make people reckless and they spend money on unwanted items and gadgets. Buying superfluous stuff resulted in animosity between families or friends as they maybe want to induce their sense of superiority that lead to unhealthy relationships in communities.

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for Apple iPhone brand and Samsung cellular phone are the best in

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due to the popularity of the Apple brand

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people, despite

having Samsung phone are going to buy an Apple iPhone to exhibit others that they use a splendid brand. In conclusion, buying too much and luxurious

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life not

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life, not

only leads to raising the expectation and extended the

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demands, but

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make a struggle between individuals for excellence and conduct their society to class distinctions that have negative impacts on developed and developing countries.