Some individuals feel that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback for employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true technology is interesting
for
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in
working from
home
. Some people think that working from
home
appears to bring many
benefit
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benefits
to employees but not the employers. I partially agree with
this
statement. On the one hand, the spread of telecommunication technology using the internet, mobile phones and tablet
pc
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PC
has opened new possibilities for workers.
Firstly
, working from
home
is not only benefit to
employees but
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employees, but
it
also
profit for employers. Working at
home
can save employers many working experiences.
For instance
, employees working at
home
, employers not need to provide
tem
objective case of they
them
team
some basic facilities
like parking place
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like a parking place
for their vehicles, stationary for their use and other necessities
such
as water, canteen, toilet
,
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,
lighting.
Secondly
,

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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